Tuesday, April 23, 2013

VEG



2 comments:

  1. 1st image: the Corn seems a bit washed out with your yellow and orange range as they seem to merge a bit. try to increase/decrease the hue slider for each color to make it stand out more. (Either that or the monitor is not calibrated properly, Again) The positive points in the picture is that focus and clarity are shown in the image. Fixing the CON points will help the image.

    2nd image: This image.....is confusing. Are you trying to capture the tree and the shrubbery in front of the tree or the branch with the petals, or are you trying to capture all of the elements of life in one shot (Water, land, tree, petals, and grass) try to focus on one single subject. Here's an idea, try to isolate the branch and the petals and have them correlate to the water in the background, just an idea.

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  2. Corn: this is just...off. The corn is washed out. You have the midrange tones goin' on, but no bright whites or rich blacks. Just corn in general, seems to be just a *little* out done...again, im not trying to be an asshole.

    Flora: It took me about 15 minutes to figure out that there were flowers or something along those vines. That being said, which was supposed to be your subject? the vines? the dead/dying tree? The photo is just so *busy* and makes my eyes hurt at trying to find the subject.

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